Well I would've practiced a bit more before doing a video review. I'll be as polite in my cretique of your speech as possible. Your voice tends to sound monotone & rarely changes inflection when speaking. The self corrections you make tend to detract & hurt more than help get your point across. Definitely practice your review & write it down so it can sound as smooth & genuine as possible. I'd even be willing to record my voice to say what you have written down if you'd like to try my voice out for a video review. I'll give you my email in a PM if you'd like me to read of a script to see if I can also help out in video reviews.