My review of Tatsunoko vs Capcom

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjkD1gzQz8o

The purpose of this video is to improve my public speaking skills. Feedback would be nice.

Your voice variation is good, your eye-contact is great, and the review's pretty well-written. Maybe you could record your reviews in 20-second clips to give you time to breathe and to make it easier to edit. I like that you try not to use the same facial expression for the entire review; but try using that a little more frequently so you don't look like you're just reading off a teleprompter.

Overall, good job. I now have another reason to get this game...once I get into some money, of course...

Not bad, not bad at all. I disagree with PK on cutting it up into clips - in the real world, you do no have the opportunity to do so, so I recommend just doing it straight out, but maybe add in some game-play footage so as to not bore the watcher. Even though it's a verbal review, it is in fact a video, so the attention span of a normal person is that of a goldfish.

Overall, fantastic review. If only I could write reviews that well...

You were good. The music was not.

I could barely make out what you were saying sometimes because it was too distracting.

Pretty good review there mate, but I have to agree with Trepe, the music was a bit distracting at points but good never the less

Thanks for the advice games. I have taken attention to it. My next review is going to be adjusted to accommodate.